Tuesday, May 20, 2008

SHE

She cries
She falls
She hides
She's tall

She's blind
She's deaf
She's held
Not dealt

She laughs
She runs
She plays
She's stunned

She cries
She tries
She's stiff
But kind

She smiles
She talks
She's right
She walks

She's cold
She's out
She's bold
Throughout

A hand
Lifeless
A land
Homeless

She's clad
She's red
No sand
No bread

Love
Lack of it
The stuff
Instinctive

The tears
Hidden
Her tears
Bed-ridden

A cry
Ignored
Life
Still holds

The grip
So tight
Her heart
So light

An ending
Imperfect
A rendering
Without surface

P.S. - Just before the board result, this is what strikes me...Does this reflect something?
Hmm...I ponder....

9 comments:

Abhi said...

dont worry too much abt the 10th board results. they are mostly weird coz of effect of other timepass subjects.
(this is an excuse for me getting surprisingly low marks :D )

but yeah, 12th boards (atleast science afaik) is better :)

Anonymous said...

Kritika!
I remember this!
Man, it looks much hotter on paper (on screen, rather).. than when you read/recite it..
:D

But, it's good anyway, isn't it?
:P

Miriam said...

Really Really good... But of course, You've always been a poet na!!! xD

kika said...

@ abhi : proabaly they dont matter much but they do...at least to me...cz i broke my head for these...
and thwelfth...*sigh*

@ aanchal : remember i didnt read it...i recited it...with my hands crossed in the back and nodding my head rythmically...!

@ miriam : not always...but then, yeah!, kinda!

Abhi said...

hehehe..
yeah, best of luck! :)

was the head-breaking in order to get science stream later on?

p.s. do u come online? chat? msn??

kika said...

first, it was for the boards, then for the science stream
now for the result...
damn, I am a moaning creature, aint I?

Abhi said...

lol, no re..

what i meant was that the extra effort put in for boards was done in order to get the science stream kya??

no, wait a sec, u got the stream before the board results. oh, dumb me! :)

Anonymous said...

I agree with Aanchal and Miri.

And I gave you my reaction.:)

Anonymous said...

Good words.