Wednesday, September 17, 2008

SSPARKLY, WHITE AND YOUNG

White emerging from pink
A painful processs
A joyous smile
Painful and fragile

Wisdom emerging from within
White for what it brings
Stationed at the back
Away and saved from black


PS: For all of you who still didn't get it...It's my wisdom tooth!! :D

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

The best word in the poem was

'pink'

HA!
Continuing the legacy of giving stupid comments!

¶ЯёŖηΛ said...

I get the offers?I get the offers?
:O

You get 'em! Lovely idea! :D

Anonymous said...

Er, my friends' account of his wisdom tooth wasn't so poetic. It had ahem, a few, actually more than a few words you wouldn't wanna mention in front of your parents. :/

I'll make him read this poem and I'm sure he'll kick me. :P

Aanchal said...

thank god u mentioned what the poem was about.......my imagination ran wild while i was reading it.....

Nik said...

My account of emerging wisdom teeth would also involve a fair number of profanities.

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kika said...

@ Aanchal : *crowd applause* And the winner of the crappiest comments is *drumroll* *crossed fingers*...Aanchal!!!! But vaise, I put in pink only for you :D

@ Prerhu : I know! I had 2 more verses in mind, but then I chucked them.
And there's no denying it. You really DO get the offers.

@ Ishmeet : LOL! guess you should make him read it. Thanks for dropping by, btw.

@ Nikita : Yeah!*hi five*. We'll have that in common!!

Anonymous said...

Thanks well, I am so, honoured.
:D

It was tough, you know, but I guess talent comes from within.

Abhilasha said...

lol, this was too good...
but im glad u made it a point to mention what u were talking about :P

Vasudha said...

Ah. I had um.. something else in mind until I came to the post script. :P

I still don't have a wisdom tooth. :| Ima remain a moron for life. >.< :P

kika said...

O! Puh-leez!!
Vasudha...You're like this child genious...



And seriously, I'm not exaggerating!
I swear.

Radhika Saxena said...

Your wisdom tooth has ugoed already?! wow! :|
I want mine! rinw! :( *BHAIN*

Radhika Saxena said...

Vasu,you woh bhi moron? what a joke! hahahaha!!

Anonymous said...

Awww! Rads! YOu'll get it. Someday...


*crosses fingers and smirks*

Disha said...

PINK! PINK! PINK!
*starts jumping like a five year old who got a ticket to Willy Wonka's chocolate factory* :P

Disha said...

[At Wii]
Ima remain a moron for life.


Yeah right
You're probably more wise than all of us put together.